Moonlight

Moonlight
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Has an ethereal feel to it Carole, nice work.

No it's not messy Carole. But more detail and I think it would really shine. Well that's my view.

Thanks Stephen and John. Yes John I know something missing, don't know where to put it though.......

There's an article in The Artist this month about resurrecting messy work, but it doesn't apply to this. I think it's smashing.

I don't think this is messy, Carole. I love the red.

It's excellent work overall Carole. A few spiky rushes foreground bottom edge should make it perfect.

Thank you for ideas and comments. Ok Jim spiky bushes, will do :)

Wow , I love it Carole its so different, yours colours, textures everything, great art !!!

Lovely painting

Lovely Carole, at first I thought a stronger yellow would give the lift you want but now I am not sure. Probably best to leave well alone as it is a beautiful painting.

PS - I wouldn't add anything further to it: you have enough features in the different textures, add more detail and you'll be in danger of crowding it. You can always do more versions, after all.

Beautiful painting Carole lovely colours

Thanks very much for your valuable suggestions I will take on board. Not done any extras yet as didn't know where to put. As Robert says, it could look over the top with more twigs.

You are very kind Helen :)

This is so expressive, Carole. I love the textures, and gorgeous complimentary colours. Messy can be fun!

No, it works for me Carole.

I like it just as it is Carole

Very mysterious and has a ghostly feel about it. Good for Halloween.

Lots going on in this lovely piece Carole, great textures and colours. Sounds as if you enjoyed doing this! Lovely stuff!

Thanks very much for your generous comments.

I don't think you could go wrong with adding a few bats......lol only kidding Carole, it's magical. Not messy at all!

Lovely - good textures in the foreground too. I really like it exactly as it is! 😊

Lovely work Carole

Interesting work, Carole, always lovely textures.

Looks great!

Posted by T H on Mon 18 Sep 21:03:55

I like the texture and colours. I love the bottom half of the painting without the moon.

This is great Carole. Loads of mood and some lovely textural effects.

Thanks again all, lovely to hear everyone's different views. Fiona, I thought about bats too!😊

Those main colours compliment each other so well, this is a stunner Carole. I may have been tempted to drop in a small figure in the distance, but that's me....

Or maybe two Alan? Romantic moonlit walk 💕

Lovely atmosphere, Carole. (Maybe the faint silhouette of perhaps a deer in the white space at the bottom would add interest if you feel it needs something extra, or an owl in flight?)

Magical Carole. You are so good at these fantasy paintings.

Yes Carole, I was thinking of two initially but didn't want to appear a romantic...

Thanks Jenny interesting suggestion sounds good but I'm not good at deer, maybe a bird. Thank you Val x. Alan, oh go on you know you are :))

I like this very much as it is Carole. The textures and your choice of colours around a misty moon work beautifully.

Thank you very much Avril much appreciated.

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Mixed media. A bit messy! Lot of faults but fun.

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Carole Swingler

Self- taught artist, I have dabbled in watercolours for many years on and off. My first love is flower painting in watercolour. Now trying many different media including acrylic inks, gouache, all types of pencils to try loose-ish semi abstract images.

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