Yachts by Lionel Simister

Lovely feeling of space and a vast sky. I think your wise additions have definitely turned it into a really good painting.

it is better and rather good. I like the composition and particularly the clouds.

I echo what Thea and Dawn say. I didn't see the original but I've just checked it out and your addition of the yachts and landmass and especially the waves in the foreground have turned what was a lovely sky painting into a brilliant seascape.

What a breath of fresh air on this wet and dreary day Lionel, it is a beautiful painting now with super colours and a real sense of the open sea out there

What a difference a few additions have made Lionel. A bright and blustery success I would say!

Well, I or at least the painting, seems to appeal to the ladies! Thank you so much for your comments. I am pleased you each like the additions. They seem to have done the trick and turned an experiment into an acceptable picture. Now I can get back to my cottage watercolour and try to sort that out!

Lovely tones and colour Lionel - a successful painting

A lovely piece, Lionel. It has a wonderful atmosphere and vibrance.