Southfield Lane (project sketch) by Fiona Phipps

Wow, Fiona. This really is an eye catcher. Stunning result!

Beautifully done Fiona.

Very well done Fiona. It looks over powering the white. Takes something from the good ink work. The stone fence on the left for example would have been great with some pen work to it. That’s my thought about it. And I feel it’s the kind of feedback you look for. A good composition that’s for sure.

Another beauty Fiona, you never fail!

I think this works well Fiona, working on a mid toned paper gives it a lift.

I love the effect Fiona.

I'll respond now before it disappears with all these multiple posters. Another interesting little sketch Fiona, some nice drawing without too much detail, great stuff.

The paper makes a great background Fiona, I would never have thought of using brown paper, and it works brilliantly. Love the use of the white gouache, great sketch.

Yes it works beautifully

The mid toned paper and the the sharp contrasting colours work really well.

New and lovely, Fiona.

A great sketch Fiona, I do like the brown paper and I like the white!

Many thanks Mia, still striving to get to your standard with my ink work! Thanks Kal! Yes John, I take your point ref too much white, I think I may try to do some pen work over the top of some of it, and maybe, as you suggest add more pen work to the lefthand wall. Yes I like this kind of feedback John.....thank you for taking the time. Thanks very much Carole, Stephen, Adele for your comments much appreciated. Alan, thank you very much as always.

Thank you very much Linda, yes I like the effect of the brown paper. It’s a spiral bound book by Sea White....I think. Thank you very much Derek and Andre.

Thank you very much Cesare and Margaret, appreciate your comments.

Good effect on the "coloured" paper.

Thanks very much Richard.

You've been busy Fiona. Well done you!!

Louise, I’m making the most of this flush of inspiration because I know it will dry up if I stop! I can’t seem to satisfy my need to put something on paper at the moment! Lol Thank you.

Love the colouring - good idea - good painting Fiona

Many thanks Maureen.

I really like the way you have done this. I particularly like the impact of the white.

Thanks again Gudrun!

Great effect Fiona

Thanks Pete!