Reworked by Jenny Harris

Nice art deco feel Jenny. Good work

I've never considered any of your work bland Jenny, these are gorgeous colour combinations.

Many thanks David and Alan for your kind comments. (I recently read, in the Artist I think it was, that if a painting doesn't seem to be working, it's often that there's not enough tonal contrast, and I think this was the problem with my earlier version.)

Beautifully drawn great perspective Jenny, lovely design.

Thanks very much, Carole!

Beautifully painted Jenny. Reminds me of the old railway posters.

Thanks, Carole! I love the old railway posters.

Reworked and yes - it Works. Composition and palette spot on. You should feel good about this painting.

Many thanks, Clive, for your kind comments (and, yes, I am now happier with this one.)