Lakeland Bridge 2

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Well done Barry, the summer tree seems more in keeping with the scene. The foreground shadow seems to make the tree more a part of the picture, than just an after thought. Just shows how we can improve our paintings with a little consideration. I think this is a very good work now.

Posted by Stephen Slater on Fri 16 Dec 09:59:26

Nice one Barry. Much improved, good job....

Posted by Jim Morris on Fri 16 Dec 14:09:49

Thank you Stephen and Jim, it's good to share and discuss.

Posted by Barry Hulme on Fri 16 Dec 20:09:42

Hi Barry. I like it much more now. It all seems to fit together so much better.

Posted by Cherry Bray on Sat 17 Dec 21:57:36

Hang on Studio Wall

16/12/2016

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This is for Stephen Slater and Cherry Bray, I have roughly put in the trees and shadows and throw it out for your comment as to whether it improves the composition. I feel that my first post was overworked and if I paint the scene again I would try to improve the recession ibetween back, middle and foreground.

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Barry Hulme

I started painting in 2004, I am influenced by Wesson, Seago and many of the great masters, more recently I enjoy the work of Steve Hall, John Hoar and Alvaro Castignet to name but a few. I paint in a loose style and try to simplify as I can. The medium I enjoy most is watercolour but dabble with…

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