An experiment

Not quite sure where to look at this one, I cannot find a focal point. Interesting colours Max. But I do like some of your other paintings better.. So pleased you like my ellies. S Is Betty well ?

I like vibrant colours but I feel one has to be careful not to flood the eyes with them all over and I feel your art tutor probably pushed you too far. However, having said that, this painting has an abstract vibrancy that is very appealing and interesting. The choice of colours is very good and all the curving shapes add excitment. Tutors can be a mixed blessing sometimes - listen to them and then do your own thing.

Thank you Sylvia & Thea for your comments, i wasn't pleased with this one, i wanted to do it my way but the teacher insisted i put the colours in that she suggested, i put it on POL to see the reaction i would get, i am glad i did, thank you.