Storm Approaching by max lennox

Much better, Max. I can feel the mist rolling in over the distant hills. I like the way you have strengthened the foreground, which adds depth to the painting. The water is a lovely shimmer that isn't so strong that it detracts from the misty look. Nicely done.

Once again thank you for your comments Thea.....I tried strengthening the foreground to give it more depth i am glad you liked it......i still value your support bless you

I liked the first one Max, but this is better. I even think you couldstrengthen the fore ground even more... Lovely and atmospheric.

The first one had a lovely delicate feel about it, but I like this one . It gives more perspective. Great colours.

very nice .as Thea says .the second is better ,you are on your way to being a good watercolourist I think Theas advice is invaluable

Lovely Max. Smashing wet in wet technique. Marvellous so much improvement - as Alan says you are well on your way. PS as always thank you so much for looking at my artwork and commenting.

The sky and hills are very good Max.....You have some good advice, I don't know enough about watercolour to be much help...Give my love to Betty...Steve.

This is lovely, colours are fab, like them both.

Thank you Sylvia for your usual & very valid help, i take what you say on board & will make the necessary alterations. Thank you Carole for your helpful comment i tried to improve the perspective. Thank you Alan for your comment, as you say Thea has sound advice which is alway's very welcome, i will take you both up on it. Jeannette as usual thank you for your valid comment & advice alway's very welcome. Thank you Steve for your comments i tried varying the sky & hills this time to keep your interest, Betty sends her love. Karleen thank you for your comments so glad you liked them both i aim to please.