No comments needed by Marjorie Firth

Like the changes Marjorie!

Very good. And the extra contrast works great

Both are excellent paintings , the right hand one is in my opinion the better of the two .

Like the slightly darker tones, Marjorie

Your changes have given it much more ooomph

Lovely I like them both . I like the left one the best

Both are lovely, I can't decide which I like best.

There's a delicate airy feeling to this beautifully painted still life.

Very good but my preference is for the slightly darker one as it gives more contrast.