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It's your painting - but if you want a comment, I think I'd make the ground beneath the heffalump a bit darker: a beast of that size would cast shadow.... and he's a bit on the light-colour side by comparison with the more distant animals.
But I'm also aware of the dangers of overworking any watercolour and don't want to lead you astray. I won't add any more comment therefore unless you specifically request it!
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I’m going to leave it alone for another day as I cross with myself for not spotting the obvious things. I really shouldn’t have starts it last week knowing there would be interruptions over the Jubilee and a family party . I will put it down to lack of concentration and then trying to fit in a bit of painting tine , silly mistake to make .