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Strengthen the foreground boat, and I mean considerably! It’s too close in tone to the background.
It’s not that easy this one, which why I left it to everyone else. You’ve got some rather nice colours and bits of brushwork going on, almost there!
It’s probably how it was on Dawn’s photo, but always do your own thing, photo’s are there for reference only! - but you know that!
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by Alan Bickley
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If I strengthen the foreground boat too much won’t it look over worked though Al? To too heavy handed with the paint? Would it be better to weaken the background somehow.......?
I might have a go at the other picture like this and tackle the background differently, in a sort of vague way. Thanks Alan for your guidance. X
I’ve attempted one of Dawn’s earlier photo’s this afternoon.....not happy with the tree branches....again too over worked.

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