Am i improving?

Am i improving?

You are achieving some great description marks eyes nose mouth nice just the chin line joins with the neck breaks the flow for me Peter

I think you are improving a lot Peter. The face is lovely but I have to agree with Dennis that the chin/neck line doesn't quite flow. It may be the hard line beneath the chin. Maybe also the shoulders are a little too angular. But I think that could easily be corrected.

yes peter you are improving its very nice

Peter, you will need to listen and act on the advice given in your previous post in order to develop your skills further, but I fear that it may have gone unheaded.

Portraits so difficult to get right Peter. A book about it or better get a DVD on portrait painting they are a great help. Good for you persevering.

Hang on Studio Wall

Taken lots of advice, hope i am improving..

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Peter Loft

Took a watercolour painting course on board the Oriana in May last year. Got the bug. Bought lots of water colour materials. Later on joined a painting class in Hull. moved on to acrylics and do at least 2 or 3 paintings a week......Now have 3 hobbies, painting,photography and magic tricks.

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