Sunday Morning Mgarr

Sunday Morning Mgarr
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Looks nicely balanced Thalia. If I had to make any criticism, it's the background hills which are a bit fussy and tend to compete with some of the main points of attention. Hope you don't mind me saying! still nice though...

I love the vibrancy of your work, Thalia. This is super.

A lovely warm and sunny palette, Thalia.

Really like the foreground here Thalia and lovely warm colours 😃

Beautiful scene with bold colours, Thalia.

Looks pretty good to me: wish I was there!

Splendid scene Thalia. Boats and more boats all nicely captured. (-:

Thanks for that useful comment, Alan, just what a girl needed!!! I'll get my sponge out!!! I was at this spot again this morning, and these two main characters were still moored, It's definitely too fussy, Thank you Seth, Ellen, Linda, Cesare, Tessa [you'd be most welcome!!] Michael and Jim. I painted here again this morning and the new one has seahorses init!! Watch this space!!! lol

Lovely warmth in this one Thalia, super work!

Thank you Margaret

I hope you didn't mine Thalia, you are a very talented painter and it's difficult to mention things. This did jump out at me a bit though so I couldn't resist. My stuff is always open to suggestions, and I do get some good advice at times.

Thank you Gudrun. Alan, that's why i post! I actively want criticism! It was very helpful and I want to thank you for your honesty. Hopefully I've saved it by sponging the darker bushes back somewhat and repainting in the masts. What do you think???

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13/05/2018
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This is last Sunday's visit to Mgarr harbour for plein air work, I've looked at it for a long time knowing something was not quite right. i finally decide to crop it into this square shape, losing some of the boats on the right. I think it makes a tighter composition, but composition isn't my strong point!

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