The Grammer School Rev1

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A lovely scene Stephen, great sky.

Posted by Carole Swingler on Sat 06 Dec 09:44:37

This is better Stephen, well done.

Posted by Derek Snowdon on Sat 06 Dec 10:30:26

Many thanks Carole and Derek.

Posted by Stephen Slater on Sat 06 Dec 11:03:07

Yes, cropping the scene does help, Stephen. Nicely done!

Posted by Seok Yam Chew on Sun 07 Dec 15:04:58

Thanks once again Seok.

Posted by Stephen Slater on Sun 07 Dec 18:10:42

What an improvement! Now my eye is guided by the tree and on to the buildings further back. Before, I was torn between the two roads left and right.

Posted by Frank Bingley on Mon 08 Dec 09:49:15

Hang on Studio Wall

13/04/2015

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I thought I would repost taking into account members suggestions, I do think they improve things, many thanks.

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Stephen Slater

I am a self taught amateur painter, I mostly paint landscapes in watercolour but I 'dabble' in other mediums from time to time. I really enjoy my art, especially painting outdoors when the weather allows.

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