Golden Bay

Hi Paul, I like this, its colurful, has depth and the boat is well drawn and painted. Coluld you print it out first on thick paper and try out the changes?

I woudn't crop - in fact I think the strength of the yellow wash plus the signature on the right helps balance the weight of of the boat on the left. A signature should never be overlooked - I often use it to assist in balance as part of the picture itself as is the case here - in fact I often add a signature in pencil first just to see if it is in the right place before permanently commiting it in ink. Not sure about land mass reflections - worth a try as suggested by Stephen. Anyway as for the picture itself it is a lovely study - I do like it with or without any changes.