Hadrian's Wall

Hadrian's Wall
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I retrieved the comments from my email, please feel fee to add any further comments, Cheers Paul. SYLVIA EVANS Wrote: Very atmospheric, but I think that the two figures should be bigger, look at the size of the grasses in comparison, or move them further into the back ground. The stones are super, really solid and substantial. Carole Swingler Wrote: Wall lovely, good feeling of space, the picture goes on forever into the background. Jeannette Harrison Wrote: Agree with all the above. Better cropping of this painting would enhance your work. Well done. Beatrice Cloake Wrote: The figures are seen from above. They are the right sizes. It is the wall on the left that might be too high too soon. Otherwise lovely atmosphere and colours. Paul Beattie Wrote: Looks good to me. Think you need to sort out the lighting and take another photo to show its true colours. Good work.

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31/03/2015
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Thank you everyone for your comments, I am worried about the height of the people?, took Paul Beaties advice and took another photo with better lighting to show true colours, deleted picture and lost everyone's comments, sorry!

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Paul Atkinson

I was born in Yorkshire, UK, my family immigrated to New Zealand in 1960. In 1999 I returned to my homeland for a month after 40 years absence and returned to the UK in 2005 for a working holiday for 4 years, during this time I took up watercolours for the first time after spending most of my early…

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