Little Red Boat

Little Red Boat
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The rain and the sky near the horizon is great, the boat does it need more shadows?

Posted by Holger . on Sun 06 Mar 20:34:41

I have read the discussion in the forum and would only wish to add my observation that, as Holger says, a few more darks on the right of the boat and internally to give it more form. also possibly a softening of the clouds which are a little heavy. Beyond that it's a superb first attempt Michelle.

Thank you both for your encouraging comments. I'm going to have another go and see if I can make some improvements.

You have added my comments in the forum. Let's see what you do with it again, sure it will be good.

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06/03/2016
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Hi all, I haven't painted for many years and this is a double first... first time painting with oils and the first time painting a seascape. This is only my rough practise piece that I did to try the colours and composition, but I wouldmassivley appreciate any suggestions for improvement. It was done in one sitting (approx 2 hours)... including procrastination time!

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