Young man showing off by Chris Howat

You have done his form very well

The long, lanky form of adolescent youth - you've caught that well: and he probably has a right to show off, in the sense of flaunt it while you've still got it! I, um ... I haven't. I'd like to see this on hot-pressed paper, drawn and painted in Chinese ink - there's a thought for you! The subtlety of the ink would help to capture those soft shaded areas, a sharper touch here and then would help to define them.