My big doodle

If this is a doodle then doodle on Barry - a great piece in its own right Barry. Any errors would not be perceived by many - one man's flaws are another man's highlights. And who is to say what is an error anyway - improvements maybe, but errors?

Lovely work Barry, as you say doodling takes away all the need to fiddle and complicate a scene, this reminds me of the work of the modern impressionist painters work I enjoy viewing in the magazines.

Thanks Michael, I agree from my point of view my errors would relate to composition and some poor marks but I am willing to wager that I wouldn't get the same freshness if I did another version with those points in mind. Also thanks to Stephen those painters in the magazines are probably the same ones that I admire but I hope I am not to similar as I want to develop my own style.

I agree with everything you say below Barry. Although I rarely paint in watercolour I find I get tighter and tighter the more I stick to a "plan". I'm afraid the next thing I post may show this too. But I'm going to make an effort to "doodle". Great result here though.

Bang on Barry

Well done to have the courage to work in this loose way. Ticks most boxes for me Barry.

Works for me.

Thanks for your comments to Margorie, Dennis, Linda and Gudrun.

Very nice picture, Barry.

Lovely