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Much better than mine Linda. I prefer Denise's opening lines to mine, and Sylvia's much better last line.
So thus far.....
There was a young lady called Tote,
whose ability to swim was remote.
She longed for a swim,
but her hopes were quite dim,
that the ring would keep her afloat.
This scans much better. It requires a different pic. My winter people in the background have no relevance now. (Come to think it, they didn't before.) In future, I'll think of the limerick BEFORE doing the pic.
Thanks folks.