Light around the corner

Light around the corner

Pastel painting, feedback

Can anyone help me out with this painting, I'm not sure about it, but can't work out what's wrong. Thank you . Lindsey

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Hi Lindsey, it’s the light! The shadows of the trees will be 180 degrees to the light, yet the bend in the road is in shadow. The open mid ground beyond the bright green grass looks like it is in shadow or is too dark and the shade on the tree itself is 90 degrees with the lighter trunk facing the darkest shadow.

Hi Lindsey. Theres an area on the forum where artists can ask for advice from other members. You will find it here https://www.painters-online.co.uk/forum/works-for-critique/ - worth posting for some help!