A little more.....

Can't decide now..I like this one as well :)

It's good. Like the first...but not much in it. Maybe just the blue on the water and none in the sky???? I don't know. Like it.

Very original and successfully done, Jim... quite a unique style..

I liked the first one, because it was a bit like one o' they haikus - a very bald, bold statement, oriental in its simplicity but actually quite complex when you thought about it. This is interesting for different reasons - but I think I prefer the earlier version.

Both versions look great. I like the addition of the blue.