Cow Parsley by Susie Dove

From what I can see Susie this is not as terrible as you make out. Perhaps a few scattered poppies in the middle would have connected the cow parsley with them or some larger leaves placed midway.

Can't give any practical advice not experienced enough but I think it is a fine painting...I love the Cow Parsley

Thanks both. I was going to put in the leaves, had the cow parsley gone as I had planned, but as it went wrong I gave up. Perhaps I should have continued just for the practise!

Your painting caught my eye immediately. I think it is lovely. I really like the Cow Parsley. Adding the poppies adds to it. A very nice pen and was indeed.

Perhaps I'll have to have another go and not cut it up next time!