Race Horses

I really like the haziness of the painting with nothing over defined. I have never used the mediums this is done in so I don't know about the difficulties of achieving a look with them. However, I have done a few race horses in my time and know that conveying dynamic movement is the key to it. Possibly showing flying turf around the horses hooves in a more definite way (i.e. darker splashes) might help this dynamism. However, this is a very mid-tone painting and as such it has harmony, so maybe adding darker tones may jar. All these decisions are very tricky, aren't they! Overall, I think you have achieved a very good drawing (horses not easy) and a nice atmosphere, so I think job well done.

Thanks for your comments Thea and apologies for my typos. For info:- the painting is a bit darker than this in reality, but got lighter in the scanning process