Bananas! by Simon Crump

Your tones of colour to describe shade and shape are lovely Simon. Regarding perspective, I can't comment because I'm useless at a subject like this......and perspectives.

The jug is just fine and goes well with the fruit - I think it's the bottle that's out. The jug is a much better shape and not like a slab within the composition.

Thanks both for your comments. Phil, your absolutely spot on! Hadn't picked up on it before, but now it jumps out a mile!

Perspective is a nightmare but this picture works regardless. Some artists have just about every perspective there is in a single picture. Great work so far.

I think this is why I like this composition, the different perspectives. That's what makes it work and gives it energy, that, and the great rendering