Bananas! by Simon Crump

Bananas!
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Your tones of colour to describe shade and shape are lovely Simon. Regarding perspective, I can't comment because I'm useless at a subject like this......and perspectives.

The jug is just fine and goes well with the fruit - I think it's the bottle that's out. The jug is a much better shape and not like a slab within the composition.

Thanks both for your comments. Phil, your absolutely spot on! Hadn't picked up on it before, but now it jumps out a mile!

Perspective is a nightmare but this picture works regardless. Some artists have just about every perspective there is in a single picture. Great work so far.

I think this is why I like this composition, the different perspectives. That's what makes it work and gives it energy, that, and the great rendering

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01/04/2015
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This took me so many attempts, the bananas went black! Still haven't got the perspective on the white jug correct.

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