Incoming tide at Marloes

Like the texture of the rocks I also like it as it is .

I wouldn’t change anything Sarah. The rocks look so formidable and this has a very threatening atmosphere. Great work.

It works as it is Sarah, like the movement against the hard static shapes.

I like it as is, the monotone approach really emphasises the power of those rocks

Really like this Sarah, it’s dramatic -confident marks too-

Love how you have drawn this!!

Thank you Paul , Carole, John, Heather, Rachel and David - i think i will resist the urge to mess around with it!

It works really well as it is Sarah with plenty of drama. I think if any colour were added it would still be really good but may take a little away from the drama of the monochrome in this instance. That is the beauty of art in that you never really know if any changes would be helpful or not until they are made.

It looks great Sarah as is. It is always tempting to add colour.

Very effectively done. Great textures.

You may lose some of the drama adding colour Sarah, it’s terrific.

Thanks so much for your thoughts David, Denise, Spencer and Fiona. Will leave it alone I think!

Bold and lively Sarah. I have the same dilemma quite often. Usually I add the colour and often it improves but not always. There’s plenty of room to sit next to me on the fence. Ha

That’s good to know! I am a professional fence sitter myself Martin so more than happy to join you! Thanks for the comment too.