My granddaughter

Fabulous drawing. I particularly like the unusual way you have drawn here hair. If I had to add anything I would say a speck of white light in her pupil would give added dynamism as well as work with the way the light is falling on her face and hair. Welcome to the site Peter.

Thank you so much for your comment, Heather! I can see exactly what you mean. I drew her face from a photograph and that possibly accounts for the missing 'glint' in her eye!! So grateful for your observations. Thank you!