Baby Pumpkin by Leanne Inchley

Hello Leanne Good attempt. Portraiture is difficult - just a tiny smidgeon out and it will look wrong. In this one the mouth looks good, but the eyes look too big. I hope you do not mind me giving you a few tips. There is usually a shadow under the top eyelashes - without this eyes tend to look mad and staring. We do not usually need to open our eyes wider than the top of the pupil. You cannot see through the iris, so there is no point. So you do not usually see all of the iris. But you have put in the reflection in eyes and shaded in the irises out from the pupils. The eyebrows are sensitively done. Hope this helps.