Depth by Jane Ogden

A good piece of work but if you could pop into the path say a small with dog it would give the picture more virility. As it stands I am uncertain as to whether my eye is to follow the path to ??? . . . or to let it rest on the church.

Thanks for your feedback - that's very helpful. The composition was already provided to me as a piece of homework but, you're quite right, there's nothing stopping me from trying to be more creative about how I approach it by adding my own touches!

Stars of the show are those middle distance trees, very clever subtle variations in tone keep all of them separate and i love your shadowy bases of the right hand ones picked out against the sunlit field beyond