Hall i th Wood BOLTON

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You have great patience! Half-timbered properties take a lot of painting - I like this, and can see it as a book illustration. It was well worth taking the time over it you surely must have taken.

Posted by Robert Jones, NAPA on Thu 27 Aug 22:47:14

Robert, thanks for your comments. I have updated the foreground to push the Hall back, following a comment by Susan Stokes.

Posted by James A Deal on Tue 01 Sep 00:23:44

Suzanne was right The foreground needed tidying up.So this is the tidied up version

Posted by James A Deal on Thu 22 Oct 23:25:13

Hang on Studio Wall

31/03/2015

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Suzanne Stokes Wrote: Lots of nice things in this - but I feel the Tudor beams dominate the picture because they are so black and precise. Soften them a bit and maybe strengthen the drawing of the daffodils. You can see every brick on the building, but the daffs are 'out of focus' in spite of being in the immediate foreground.

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