Bill

It works very well as a portrait, tricky angle but you've done him proud

I find this very poignant Dorothy, great work.

Yes he is tired! but (as a pastel artist myself ) I applaud your clever use of the medium Dorothy it really works well.

Yes it works very well as it brings me to wonder what is going through his mind.

At first sight, I thought it was meant so show the sadness of the First World War. It works for me.