Kirchner rework 2 by Derek Snowdon

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You can see you digested the work and came up with a beauty Derek. I would have kept the other

Thanks dennis, but that is no more and painted over as you know. Will play with this some more...........maybe

Still a good blend of shapes and sizes. I prefer it with the lines, but it stands well on its own.

Thanks Seok, but it is completely reworked as posted today.

Dis-satisfied couldn't rest so I have gessoed over it and painted this piece with a 1" flat Rosemary brush, not a card in sight as have to get into using them again. Done this afternoon, with less reference to the original and been free and left some marks/lines. Like this better and now deciding to add the lines again 'cos I like them and also more imortantly bump up the whites. Still feeling my way into abstract work. Thoughts welcome please. Just before posting this, I am thinking it's overworked and too much going on.A lot of marks were made thtough my shaky clumsiness with the brush and felt I should try an absorb them in the work, but failed I think..