Iffy by xxStuart xxFairlamb

The construction is good, can we see it finished please?

The portrait part is lovely. I would be tempted to cut it off just below the shoulders.

It's unfinished I know, but I rather like her face and especially the hair as it is now. The hair just hinted at with the dark outline and random fine white lines (which I'd leave in) looks good . I'd leave her head, hair and shoulders as they are now and also, crop just below the shoulders. Her bust isn't as good. My opinion anyway!

Agree about this being better as a portrait as the face has a nice gentleness to it. The heavy breasts rather jar in my opinion and I agree with others about cropping at the shoulders. However, just my opinion.