Beach Huts reworked

This is an improvement certainly but I still say more colours to the structures and something in the foreground or crop. Keep at it Sylvia

Will do....thank you Derek...

I agree - some different colours on the roof of some of the structures might be worth a try. You could always paint some examples on drawing paper to the shape of the roof and cut it out and overlay on the painting to see the effect of more colour and also different colours. This can really help to select what works best.