Geometric 3

There's a lack of co-hesion for me, here. Plus I think your colour schemes could be better. I wouldn't comment if I didn't think it worth doing so, so please don't be offended, these are just my amateurish attempts to advise.

Hello Ruth, I am not offended at all,all feedback helps a lot,this was one of my early paintings,along with Geometric 4 and was just trying out things really,but thought id put up here to get feedback,which really does help,I dont mind criticism at all,the only time i would mind is,if it was just plain nasty for the sake of being nasty,which yours is not at all. Thanks again. Russ