sparrows by Pratim Das

This is beautiful, Patrim. All the best with the Sparrow Magazine. Looking at the sparrows, bottom left, do you think a little more brown pigment on the furthest bird would enhance the one in front and maybe throw him/her a bit more to the front, to give a little distance between them.

I'm sure this will be perfect Pratim so lovely. ps. Perhaps the bottom sparrow is female they are paler aren't they?

Perfect sparrow behaviour Pratim......good luck with the magazine!!

Thanks CA Jones for the suggestion ... i will do the colour work .... Thanks Carole swingler ... Yes They are the females ... Thanks Fiona Phipps ....