A mothers love

It's a nice little sketch. You say that you think her eyes don't look quite right. Perhaps they are a little too large and also, more noticeable to me, the line of her neck doesn't have enough curve in it.. Having said that I repeat that it's a nice sketch and conveys the mothers love! I like it and you should try painting it.

It is a lovely sketch. My favourite area is where a baby clings to the mother. Less is sometimes more. And fewer linear work can be more beautiful. I would also perhaps downplay the hairband in mother's hair.