Colin Steed - Artist & tutor. Your painting has a very soft look to it Dave. Very restfull. I like your choise of colours. May be in an effort to get that sunlite look you may be a little week with your washes but you have balanced that with lighter shadows. Perspective is your main problem. The shadow that tucks behind the wall should finish lower, the distant car could then be lowered a touch and the foregroung car could then be raised showing less roof and more rear screen. Good attempt Dave.