This is lovely Janet, delicate and charming.

Janet, I LOVE your compositions, they have a lot going for them. Would it add impact to them, do you think, if you upped your tonal ranges a bit? Slightly darker emphasis here and there? Only a tentative suggestion, feel free to ignore, because your vision is not mine. i am looking for a little more impact, maybe? Very very delicate yes, and charming indeed.

Thanks for comments. I agree Ruth I can see what you mean and I am always open to positive comments, that is partly why I log onto this site because it is always good to get constructive feedback. Also I enjoy looking at everyone else's work. Such a wide range of styles and ideas.

Janet, this is lovely, very expressive and delicately done.

Great potential Janet.

Lovely!