woodbridge suffolk

Nicely done Christopher, perhaps you could go a little stronger with your tones.

The mass of rigging would tempt me to line with a similar pen ALL the other shapes above water, it would possibly become a strong semi abstract. (Buildings, boat hulls, boat canopies I mean all) and add as Stephen is suggesting.

Love the softness of your sky and I think as Stephen has mentioned, strengthen up the tones here and there, especially in the shadows it would really make your lighter tones stand proud. Have a practise on some scrap paper. You choose some really nice subjects Christopher.

thankyou stephen derek and fiona.your comments are very welcome because it will hopefully lead to improvement in my future paintings .. thankyou once again.