2nd Attempt Jasmine by Carole Kelly

Nice portrait of Jasmine, like her gaze and wavey strands of hair, very nice indeed!

Very beautiful portrait.

Beautiful portrait Carole, like her expression and hair is so beautifully painted!!

Well done Carole

A good pastel Carole. Super hair.

Thank you so much for your lovely comments Angela, Stephen, Romila and John.

Thank you for your kind comments David.

She’s a beautiful girl Carole. I didn’t see your first portrait but her hair and soft skin stand out for me.

Thank you so much Fiona. She does have a lovely, kind nature.

Your treatment of the hair is very effective, especially on the far left where it appears to catch the light. Perhaps look at some light and shade on the face to enhance its three dimensional form.

Thank you Owen for constructive comments. On the actual painting you notice the light but on the photo it is rather bleached out.

This is a lovely portrait Carole- the hair is fabulous - this painting shows great skill.

I prefer this portrait Carole, it’s softer and you have captured Jasmine with her beautiful hair very well.