Ducks by River Chess at Chesham

I like this, but feel the tonal recession could have been stronger. The distant greens are as bright as the foreground which robs the painting of depth. The right hand tree also need s a bit more structure. Hope you don't mind the comments, but I teach art to adults and that would be the comments I would make to my students.

I like this, but feel the tonal recession could have been stronger. The distant greens are as bright as the foreground which robs the painting of depth. The right hand tree also need s a bit more structure. Hope you don't mind the comments, but I teach art to adults and that would be the comments I would make to my students.