Two gnomes (Paco and Carlos) by Angela Robertson

Hi Angela, I just had a look back at your other portrait, of your partner Antonio, I think maybe take a look back at how you rendered the mouth on that it was a better shape, for me the man on the left's bottom lip maybe bit full, and the man on the right just needs his lips developing, good works on the lines around his eyes wrinkled up to support the fact that he is smiling, going back to the left man maybe he needs extra line or two round his eyes as he is smiling just as much and maybe bit more work on the hairs in his beard, like you say it isn't finished yet anyway! Not sure I meant to ramble on this much I think I may be catching a touch of Robert's ramblingitus !!!

Your right about the mouths.I have been working on these.Getting the teeth in is proving trikey.also the man on the left has his tonge showing above his bottom lip.I think I,ll leave that as a dark area.The hair /beard details have been improved.I,ll try and post the almost finished version tomorrow.If not whatch this space.

Nice one Angela!