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A painting of contrasts
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Limited palette, for only my second time, of 3 colours and a neutral.
Trying to capture contrasts of; warm and cool, lost and found, detail and ambiguity, built and natural, dark and light.
Trying also to have a secondary focal area as well as a main.
Thought I'd also try warm colours in the midground, rather than always getting warmer as we get closer.
Hopefully you'll agree it was a worthwhile endeavour, and, as I am always looking for ways to improve....I will add this to the gallery but I'm putting it in the critique section as I'd also welcome any thoughts on what I could do better next time. Thank you folks.


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I'd call this a further step along the path. You've invited criticism - brave lad! - and mine would be centred not on your colour, which is a largely individual thing, but on the relative strength of the colour: the tonal values: these suggest to me that your figure with his dog could be a little stronger in tone, as they appear to be a little ghostly at present, I'm not entirely convinced by the perspective of the building, but that may be accounted for by the idiosyncracies of its architecture, and I think there's just something about those trees which isn't quite there yet.... I'd certainly make the foreground tree a lot darker, it's melting too much into the tone of the further tree almost as if it's the same object: try taking a black and white version of it, and you should see the tonal issues more clearly. Maybe a branch or twigs in strong tones would help, too.
What you've done here is basically apply colour theory - which is valuable in itself; but I think the tonal qualities are more important, and most important is combining colour and tonal theory and practice: with which, be it said, I have just as much trouble as anyone.
It was absolutely worthwhile - I think if you pushed those contrasts even more than you have, in colour, tone, recession, focal point, it would be of benefit. And adding a note of praise to the criticism - I very much like the way you've handled those steps: I well remember painting a flight of steps and discovering I'd put the shadows in exactly the wrong places - another ripped up piece of expensive watercolour paper......
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Thank you Robert.
I have indeed invited criticism....I do (I guess as we all do) enjoy validation that comes with supportive complements, but, as I'm looking to progress my skills, I usually hope for more than that, and, as the saying goes "If you don't ask..."
The figure with dog was a difficult one. I was aiming to have the main focal area up the steps, so that figure was intended as a supporting role. It has become more than that unfortunately, due to it being silhouetted against the light wall. I wondered how strong a tone it should have, as I wanted it to melt a little into the tree shadow but didn't want said shadow to be too strong. That's part of the reason the figure is not that strong. That's a balance I will need to look out for in future scenes. I deliberately wanted to keep it ambiguous, but perhaps it is a little too vague.
The perspective has taken a wobble, I agree, and this I feel is a victim of not seeing the wood for the trees...not stepping back often enough and checking 'stuff' - the roofline/gutterline is not angled enough. My mind was clearly on trying to achieve so much else.
The foreground tree needed to separate from the midground, certainly, and I was conscious of this, however hesitated to make it very dark as I wanted to avoid a silhouette type situation with it....again another thing that hopefully comes with practise...needing to use stronger values whilst not over-doing it.
Your every comment is welcomed, Robert, so thank you for your input. (and I'm happy with the steps too, cheers)
Off I go for a little more practise...


