WIP again.....

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The shadings hasn't come out over the eyes in the photo. And the mouth is questionable. Any comments welcome. Thanks Ellen
Face too flat and wide .
Hi Ellen. The mouth looks not so wide as the photo - the ear is a tad short and I think the face is still to wide. It's getting there though. Also there should be more definition of the nose joining the eyebrow on the left eye (as we look at it). But I am definitely not a portrait artist so I feel I shouldn't really be advising you. It's just what it looks like to me.
Looks ok, but the drawing looks flat, no depth in there at all. Try using the image below to help with the features and preportions. Once you get these right, then everything falls into place.
You will get there!!