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I really must congratulate you - you have your own appealing style and seem to have fallen into art without even a stumble. You have asked for comments and there is virtually nothing I can say by way of advice except for one minor item: this concerns the pathway on the left..
As painted the pathway has the appearance of standing upright and it's all to do with recession which you have mastered so well elsewhere in the painting. Firstly the cobbles should get larger the closer they get to the foreground whereas some in the middle are larger than those closest - this may be true to the actual scene but doesn't translate well in a painting. The next point is that the 'vertical ' edges of the cobbles are all at right angles to the frame. If they followed the angle of the edge of the path on the right and straightened up towards the left hand edge this would help a lot. With these two minor adjustments the path would lie flatter - hope this is clear.
Other than that this is such a great painting I feel a bit guilty even mention the point
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One of my comments Grampy is that I am envious that you have just taken up a brush and produced two lovely paintings. However Michael is right about the path and although he feels guilty for mentioning it, I am sure you will appreciate his advice. Many artists here have asked for advice because no matter how long we have been painting there always comes a time when a fresh pair of eyes are needed. And that's how we learn. I also agree with Michael that you have quite a unique style - well done.

