1st attempt

A really positive sense of light and depth here, and I like the way you've limited your palette which isn't easy. Well done! X

You have done well Peter, a lovely scene.

Don't tear yourself apart, it's a wonderful start! Howzat! Peter, it's got an atmosphere and you've got the recession just right.

You did well there Peter. Good stuff....

Fabulous oriental scene, 3 dimensional and lovely colour Peter.

A poet as well as a painter Pete! I like it, think you've done a good job here actually Pete.

Its a good attempt Peter, the soft lighting is there.