Seriously port - might be finished

This is the one I prefer, Amanda - has a richness which I like. Also, good composition.

I'm glad you prefer this one, Marjorie. It is the developed version of the scratchy pen one :-)

I like this one too......it appears to have more depth to it.

The colours are very rich and well defined in both paintings Amanda! I think that the other one is more immediate and this one is very adept. Both good examples of what can be achieved.