Venetian Invention

I like this watercolour - very well executed. You say there are a few things you are not happy with. The only thing that I can see is perhaps the sky is a little 'stormy' looking. Looking at your other watercolours (which are all beautiful) the skies have really created atmosphere. Perhaps this just needs the sky a little calmer - it depends on what effect you are aiming for. Having said that, I can't really see anything wrong with it - I wish I could paint watercolours like this!!

Sorry for the late reply Gillian. Many thanks for your comments. As luck would have it I popped it into a mount and someone bought it from me a few weeks back. I think it's one of those paintings that grows on you and it was (as they always are) much better in a mount.