Breaking Wave 2 - in progress

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Hi all, this is for a commission for next month, but would love your constructive feedback before I finish? Thanks in advance to all who do, Love and God bless, Andy 🙂🙏❤

Hi Andrew thank you for your lovely, thoughtful recent feedback. This is beautiful but the edge of the surf needs to be broken up so that it looks more natural. God bless 🌹🌹🌹

Absolutely beautiful, Andy. I am on home ground here, and would love to be going for a swim right now. The warmth that emanates from the scene is amazing. Just a few breaks in the surf that is rolling up the beach, to show the difference between surf coming in and the under surf going out. So it's not all one continuous surf. But otherwise its stunning. ❤️xx

Thank you, dear Carole, for that lovely feedback and suggestion; Much love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏

Thank you, dear Jacqui, for that very thoughtful feedback and your suggestion; Much love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏xx

This is looking very good Andrew and agree with the suggestions of Carole and Jacqueline

Thank you, dear Heather for that feedback; Much love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏 x

Great sky and wave formation on the breaking waves Andy. Whoever is going to be the lucky recipient will no doubt be happy with the commission ...

Thank you, dear Linda, for that fabulous feedback and I very much hope you're right; Much love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏xxx

Gorgeous wave

Thank you, Romila for that lovely response! love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏x

Thank you, Shekinah for that response! love and God bless, Andy 🙂❤️🙏

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25/09/2021
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A seashore scene as another roller breaks on a warm Summer's day - not yet complete and would really value any feedback for improvements?

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Andrew Smith

I’ve always loved water, its movement, its colour, its power. I had the privilege of working as a hydrologist for nine years before ordination, necessarily but enjoyably observing the movement of water in full flow or even in floods. That was thirty years ago but my love for moving water has not…

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