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Good effort, but to be supercritical (which is what you requested) the inter corner of the eye looks a bit sharp and cold be a little more curved. there is usually a gap between in the upper and lower lashes. There is usually a shadow under the upper lid. In your eye the shadow is more pronounced towards the outer corner, rather than the inner corner where most of the shadow should be. Hope this helps.
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The iris isnt round and the pupil isnt central. The tear duct portion seems to big and has no circular lacuna at the very nasal end (which I THINK eyes do have where the drain lies). And whilst it might be true to your model's life, the peaks of the brow and the lid are so far from coincident that they create disharmony...they do to me anyway.
BUT...you asked for critiques so thats what I have done. Its a very good drawing IMHO and if I had done it I'd (eye'd???) be very pleased!!
david
